Thank you for sharing the poem. They say those who hurt others, do it because they are insecure and want to feel the control and power over another. ‘advice me if i am wrong’, but, is it not better for the victim to sound dignified and strong to take away from the predator, the one addition which is power/ control. Having see this happen to a family member, the predator never feels remorse. So letting them know you are destroyed by them and fear them fuels that feeling making them crave more of it? (this does not mean fight them back.
Domestic violence is never ok and picturing the woman shrinking in the face of her abuser is such a sad image to conjure. I do hope that more people raise awareness of abuse and the fact that you did it through a metaphorical poem was extremely powerful to read.
Very true indeed
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That’s a nice way of putting it and thanks for sharing this
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Beautiful poem! Thank you so much for sharing it.
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Very deep poem, thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for sharing!
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Oh my gosh that’s deep! Beautifully written.
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I love your poems, always so beautifully written.
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This was such a lovely read.
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Thank you for sharing the poem. They say those who hurt others, do it because they are insecure and want to feel the control and power over another. ‘advice me if i am wrong’, but, is it not better for the victim to sound dignified and strong to take away from the predator, the one addition which is power/ control. Having see this happen to a family member, the predator never feels remorse. So letting them know you are destroyed by them and fear them fuels that feeling making them crave more of it? (this does not mean fight them back.
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Domestic violence is never ok and picturing the woman shrinking in the face of her abuser is such a sad image to conjure. I do hope that more people raise awareness of abuse and the fact that you did it through a metaphorical poem was extremely powerful to read.
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They are very powerful words, trying to evoke fear in people is a horrid thing
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What an incredibly moving poem, thanks for sharing
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Such a powerful poem! I could really feel as if I was there.
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So true, abusers are dwarves really – little bullies trying to make themselves bigger at the cost of another’s happiness and security.
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Such a lovely poem, really powerful!
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Very powerful, this poem is beautiful.
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Thanks Luna.
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Such a powerful poem and such a true sentiment too.
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Thanks for your kind compliments
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These powerful, moving words elicit strong emotions. Thank you for bringing us in to the experience of it all.
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Beautiful poem!
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Thanks
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Definitely a powerful piece of writing. x
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Thanks for your kind compliments
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So inspiring that you see the sovereignty of God in the worst situations. Thank you for sharing.
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What a powerful subject to write about. I applaud you for sharing.
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