Do you remember the time my dear? To the love of my life on the occasion of Valentine’s Day.
He Says
I hear her typing.
I know she’s home
and all is well.
My heart sings in harmony with hers.
She is doing what she loves.
I feel her freeing
as she reaches for herself.
In her reaching she stretches me.
I descend the stairs
to the immediacy of her smile.
The adoration I see in her eyes
makes my manhood soar.
The self, reflected back to me in her eyes,
is a genius, a partner and friend.
It’s a commitment to the end.
For in her eyes I’m a man of stature;
Atlas in psychological musculature.
My evolving mission’s the emancipation,
after the detonation and the blast,
twinned to the life that was past.
Composite integrity blending,
we’re making each other whole.
Luxuriating in dreaming,
in forgiving,
And like art
forever enduring.
I hear her typing.
I know we’re home
and all is well.
This poem can be found in my book Splendor from Ashes
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That is a beautiful poem. You are exceptionally talented with words. Keep on writing and rocking!
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What gorgeous words! Especially loved “The self, reflected back to me in her eyes, is a genius, a partner and friend.”
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This is a beautiful poem about love. I would love for a man to feel and write something this beautiful to me.
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Great poem. I particularly like this part “The adoration I see in her eyes
makes my manhood soar.” It’s really nice to see someone you love to look at you endearingly.
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I believe my husband could say the same…if I am home, I am probably working. I need to come up with another way for my husband to know that I am home. My perfume?
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What a lovely poem.Loved it.Says so much about love.
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what a beautiful poem! definitely perfect for valentines day coming up 🙂
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What a beautiful poem with a strong message of love. I save all of the sweet letters and cards my husband has written for me over the years.
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These are beautiful photos. Love them. Happy Valentine’s Day to you
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What a lovely and inspiring poem. You really convey the hard work and life of a writer, embraced by her living man.
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Thank you
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Those familiar sounds, smells, and feelings are what makes a place feel like home. It’s wonderful you take the time to notice the smaller things.
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Lovely poem….keep on writing more. I love to come back here to read.
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That is an extraordinary poem. I would love to see it laid down as a song. I bet it would be epic.
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Thanks
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What a lovely poem! Reading this on the day of love is making it ten times more special!
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This is a great poem! Very lovely! I really love your emotions while writing.
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I love your poetry. You have an incredible ability to weave words together into something that really makes an impact on the heart.
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This is so beautiful! It’s those every day, little things, like hearing her typing away that can just hit you with feeling. My husband says it’s when he sees me painting, so I totally relate to this piece.
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A very beautiful poem with a deep meaning of the true understanding of love. I love it!
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What a beautiful writing piece. Isn’t love such a wonderful topic since there are so many ways to reveal it?
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What a beautiful way to look at an everyday, mundane moment. It reminds me of Poe and how he livens up what would otherwise be seen as boring or typical.
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Awe! What a beautiful poem! Love it!
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This is a really pretty poem! Hope you had a Happy Valentine’s Day!
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This is such a pretty poem! Hope you had a Happy Valentine’s Day!
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Thanks. Yes I did
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A lovely picture and a beautiful poem. You really have a knack for creative writing. Happy Valentine’s day to you and your loved ones.
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Beautiful poem with a nice play of words. Wished I have the same talents.
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This poem definitely hit me deep. I have been having a lot of feelings lately and this definitely pulled at me.
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That is pretty powerful. I wonder if my husband feels that way about me.
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I am sure he does!!
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What a beautiful poem this is! You have such a talent for writing… amazing job!
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Lovely poem. It was a great read today. I have to get a copy of your book. It is full of inspiring poems that touches the heart.
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This poem is beautiful to showcase the love connection between the two. I love relationships like this.
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You have a talent and it shows in your poem. Keep on sharing.
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Thank you.
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That’s such a beautiful poem. It really touched me. I’ll have to check out your book.
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Thank you.
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Such a pretty poem! Thank you for sharing this!
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Lovely poem and it make me wanted to finish to the end. Beauty written and you have so much talent in this area, keep them coming.
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Thank you.
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what an intense, beautiful connection between two lovers 😊
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Thank you.
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I needed something good to read this evening, and this poem just did that. What a beautiful way to present a words in a poem. Thanks.
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Your words are very poetic; you have such a talent with words!
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Thank you.
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Your words are always so eloquent and articulate; I love reading your poems!
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Thank you.
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What a beautiful poem! The words paint such a powerful picture and strong emotion.
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I love this poem. It’s really beautiful! I’m sure the book itself is amazing.
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What a beautiful poem, perfect for Valentine’s Day or any day of the week. Your book looks so intriguing, would love to get a copy of it to read more
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That’s a nice poem, thank you. Hope you enjoyed writing it.
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Omg what a beautiful poem!!! You definitely have a talent for getting people to feel your emotions 🙂
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What a lovely poem. This is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.
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